Essays
What a College Counsellor Should and Should Not Do to Your Essays
The line between editing and ghostwriting: brainstorming, structure, margin questions, line edits that keep your voice, how readers spot AI, and what to ask.
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Argued, never ghostwritten
The story only this student can tell, edited until it holds
Personal statement, supplements, UCAS statement, SOPs. Six brainstorming exercises to find the material, a structure that argues, and line editing that cuts hedge words and bragging alike. We do not write a sentence of it.
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Who this is for
Students we usually meet here
- Grade 12 students who have a profile and are stuck on what to write
- Students applying to the US and UK at once, who need one story told two very different ways
- Parents worried that a ghostwritten essay could cost the admit
What we do
The work, specifically
01
Brainstorming that produces material
Six exercises we run in sessions: introduce yourself three times without repeating; values to stories; essence objects; everything I want colleges to know, mapped to slots; twenty-one details; and the challenge framework of effects, feelings, needs, actions and lessons. The raw material comes out of the student, not a prompt library.
02
One story, chosen deliberately
From the material we pick the story that shows a value the rest of the application does not, and that the student can talk about for twenty minutes in an interview.
03
Structure before sentences
For personal statements: an opening that sets a real conflict, then premise, proof and conclusion in every paragraph. For SOPs and UK statements: early interest, academic preparation, evidence outside the classroom, why this course.
04
Editing that respects the writer
We cut hedge words, bragging and generic ambition. We flag every claim without evidence. We keep the student's voice, including the odd sentence a professional would smooth out, because that is what reads as true.
05
Why we never write it
Common App and most universities prohibit AI-written or ghostwritten essays, and a flagged essay can rescind an admit. More importantly, a written-for-you essay is a stranger's essay, and it fails the interview. Our rule protects the student.
How it runs
Step by step
- 01
Brainstorm (two sessions)
The six exercises, recorded in a shared document. - 02
Choose and outline
Story chosen, structure agreed, paragraph plan written. - 03
Draft and edit (three rounds)
The student drafts; we edit with tracked comments and a call each round. - 04
Supplements
Each university's questions answered with specific evidence, not recycled paragraphs. - 05
Final read
One last pass for voice, accuracy and word count before submission.
What you receive
Artefacts, not promises
- Brainstorming document with all six exercises
- Personal statement or UCAS statement, three editing rounds
- Up to eight supplements, each edited
- Activity descriptions and additional-information section reviewed
Questions
About essays
Do you write college essays?
No. We brainstorm, structure and edit. Every sentence is the student's. Universities prohibit ghostwritten and AI-written essays, and an essay the student did not write is obvious in an interview.
How many rounds of editing are included?
Three rounds on the personal statement and two on each supplement, plus a final read before submission. In practice most students need all three, because the second draft is where the real essay appears.
Can you help with the UCAS personal statement and a US essay at the same time?
Yes, and they should be built together. The UK statement is an academic argument about the subject; the US personal statement is a story about the person. Same student, same material, two entirely different structures.
What if the student has 'nothing interesting' to write about?
Every student says this and none of them is right. The twenty-one details exercise and the essence-objects exercise exist precisely for this. The interesting essay is almost never about the biggest achievement; it is about the moment that explains why the achievement mattered.
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Reading
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